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The Rock of Cashel is located in Co. Tipperary, and is the supposed site where St. Patrick visited in the 5th century. There is a large church complex built there, with elaborate and modern graves. From the wall, you can see the ruins of another place. I had to shoot through the opening in the wall to get this building. Thanks to ~Vitoldus for help with editing.

Critiques


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The first thing I thought when I saw this was standoff. The distance actually adds something to the pictures, like a sense of danger from afar. It made me imagine some rogue group of bandits hiding out in the ruins across from the castle, and the viewer is a worried citizen taking a peek. I think the framing is excellent and one of the few examples of the "rule of thirds" that I actually like.

The one thing I didn't like (which was also out of the control of the artist) was the modern lamppost and pathway in the bottom of the picture. But, I wouldn't hold that against the artist.
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:iconpilas14:
Perhaps this photograph takes framing to a new level, but to some extent, the turret which the artist has made this shot through only brings together the atmosphere of the whole piece. There is some great depth of field and lovely hues in the grass plains. The whole scene comes through quite nicely.

The castle does seem a little too dark. We lose a lot of the detail because the artist was so far away from the subject.

All in all, I think the biggest fault is also the greatest asset of this piece. The central placing of the castle in the frame. It lessens the impact but brings all focus to the overall scene. I don't know if I would be so adventurous, but it definitely works here.

I think this is a wonderful photo and can't wait to see more of the like.
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:iconnotcontrolfreaky:
Fantastic! The landscape is so .. old! So captivating!

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:iconpilas14:
Quite lovely dear ^^

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:iconfunkysockzlover:
Heres another veiw, from the abbey.
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:iconptinworth:
Beautiful! Glad you're enjoying your travels :)

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Oh


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And you went without me!!


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:iconaerozeppelin72:
very nice! Great work!
:iconblackcarrionrose:
So beautiful!

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:iconninjkabat:
My grandfather-in-law grew up in Cashel. Last time I went to Ireland, he took us on a crazy-cool tour of The Rock and showed us all the places he and his friends got hurt while playing among the ruins when they were kids.

Anyway, very nice picture of the surrounding landscape.

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I like the framing, it makes me feel like i'm there, looking out. Ok, that proly sounds lame, but thx 4 sharing this photo.

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Canon
Canon EOS 40D
1/125 second
F/7.1
35 mm
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May 1, 2009, 4:53:11 PM

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